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The fate I was left by ~Twiztid-Kitten:iconTwiztid-Kitten:



I just want to know
why your so cold
why cant you see
your killing me

I just want to hear
The dying of my fear
The way you feel
and if its real

I just want to believe
something you conceive
something you mean
without wondering

I just want to feel
safe by your will
safe at your side
and from your pride

I just want to be
one that is free
one thing thats loved
and not something aboved
©2007-2009 ~Twiztid-Kitten
:icontwiztid-kitten:

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just a thought didnt want it to pass

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:iconaffy:
I like the strucure, rhymes well too nice job on this
:iconshatteredfaith10:
i agree with affy..i liked this also..though u could have ended it better..still it was good..i applaude you

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ShAtTeReD FaItH

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